Completely Pointless Preview
There was absolutely no reason to actually release this. As has been stated, there is absolutely nothing interesting in the preview, I mean, it didn't even let the audience know what the hell your series is about. If you're going to make a preview for something, at least make it relevant to the actual thing you want us to be hyped about, rather than simply saying "hey this is a thing im making watch it pls".
I dislike this not because of the fact that it's simply a preview, but because it has no content.
Ok, I get it, damn! No need to be a dick about it.
Terrible, absolutely terrible.
The background was seizure inducing, the sound was ear raping, it wasn't long enough, there wasn't any plot to be found, the graphics were mediocre at best, but hey, at least the animation was smooth.
Iron those issues out and you might end up with a good flash movie.
One of the best action flashes out there, as good as Madness, if not better.
Also, to Afasi-korn, read the description, the first one's story is unrelated to this one's.
Great artwork, voices (Microsoft voices are epic.), and everything else.
I also loved the sudden ending, it kind of gave it the *censored* feeling.
THE VISION OF HIS WISDOM MEANS WE'LL NEVER BE ALONE!!
Good for a first
I liked it for a first, because it
A: Wasn't 2 seconds long
B: Had at least some original art... nothing major at all, but still, no matter how bad it may be, I like seeing some people that draw for themselves sometimes.
C: Was your first.
You need to lower the FPS, and remove the text in general, though. You should also use more original art.
Not only did you manage to type the ENTIRE alphabet (A, B, C, D, E, F G, H, I, J, K, L, M, N, O, P, Q, R, S, T, U, V, W, X, Y, Z) you made the white background the total opposite of the black letters, making the alphabet obviously rebellious to the horrid control of the evil, plain, one-colored boring background.
Needs a lot of work
After clicking the start button, I was greeted by the unwelcome sight of extremely choppy walking. Suddenly a gun pops out of nowhere and this random guy, who I think is the main character, puts a seilencer on it. Okay, that looked fine, it was quick and not as choppy as the walking.
I noticed the the feet moved smoothly (Though not animated well) while the body just appeared randomly where the feet went. In fact, the body moving is the most choppy thing in this movie. I also noticed that their body didn't move at all other than going forward, along with the head or hands.
After getting over how choppy the walking was, I saw him shooting some guy that popped out of nowhere. He just stands there for less than a milisecond and gets shot dead. I noticed that the sounds are going slower than the recoil and shots from the gun are, along with wounds. Next time you should make the recoil/shots/wounds 2 frames each, or slow down the Fps.
Okay, another random guy pops out of nowhere, and he has an AK-47. He doesn't even shoot, he just stands there for a split-second, and dies. I could see our protagonist picks up the AK, but he doesn't use his hands. It just magically appears on his back with some sound. Either that or your way-too-fast screen change prevented me from seeing the hands. Whatever.
When he arrives at more barren wasteland, he looks back. Now, this is my favorite part. I only liked it at all, because instead of using a motion tween and that's it, you actually animated it. You win half of an internet. Okay, so then a building drops out of the sky, and the camera goes up to show Tricky, with the words "OMFG! Clown!", both of which were from Krinkels. Oh well.
When he goes into the building, I liked how smoothly the doors went up. Oh, but then I see that the doors are going above the buildings, which ruined it. The hero pops out of nowhere (God I love saying that) and takes off his silencer. No problems there, other than the whole Pops-out-of-nowhere bit.
I'm not going to go into description of when he kills the agents, it's the same as always. They stand around like retards and get killed in a split-second. I will, however, not that he fired 4 bullets on the first kill, but only got 3 wounds on the agent. I'm not implying that he can't ever miss, I just find it unlikely.
So then Jesus pops up, and summons a sword. About a second later the sound draw sound plays. And... wait, that's it. Never mind.
Overall, you need to improve your walking skills, make the body react to the steps and not just fly to wherever the feet move. You should lower the FPS a little, and time your sounds more accurately. Also, try to not overuse Krinkel's work, and make your protagonist and antagonist have original art, not just ripped sprites.
This submission is totally pointless. You could have at least made it a trailer, not just a screen that says "COMING SOON". You should have just posted about it on your page.
Almost everything was great... the only part I didn't care for was how bad that the voice acting was... I'm okay with some bad voice acting, but not constant.
I'm glad you and I can agree!!
Very random, but not the shitty kind of random, it's the funny kind of random.
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